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When I stay up at night thinking
When I daydream in the middle of the day
When I sit and write my poetry
When I look into the digital sea that is the internet
When I smile or laugh at a joke with no meaning
When I zone out
When I lie down for the night
When I stare into the complete darkness before I depart to the land of dreams
I escape
Escape
I try to climb a wall to the rope that will allow me to escape
But the walls are to smooth
Patted down with the solid and smooth surface of pain
Sorrow
Misery
This thing I call life
Am I any good at it?
Am I going to fail as predetermined by the world?
Am I going to end and be represented as the nothingness that I see?
I try to escape these harsh questions…
But low and behold they follow me as if I packed them
Maybe I did
Between the socks and shirts…. No
With the toothbrush…. No
I think I packed it in the deep subconscious of the maze I call my mind
Unfortunately for me there is no escape
No solution
Just nothing…
Nothing…..
Nothing…..
My escape
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JVarriano Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
"I try to climb a wall to the rope that will allow me to escape
But the walls are to smooth
Patted down with the solid and smooth surface of pain"

I like that part. :)
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Silph91 Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
u knw wat's funny; when I read my own stuff I think "Gawd damn this is good who the hell wrote it!!"
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JVarriano Featured By Owner Nov 30, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
:giggle:
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relikstheblue Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2009
very good :) (this is Doc. Hell btw)
check out some of my poerty
:)
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janey-jayne Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2009
theres more than nothing in there if u can write like that ;)
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Silph91 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you ^_^
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neko-xiii Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
it reflects my own lyf... brilliantly written my friend
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Silph91 Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Thank u ^_^ wrote it at 4am one night.
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neko-xiii Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2009
4 am wow dats so cool
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Silph91 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
lol ty
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